_When you think og Orlando doy you think of Alex Loynaz as Orlando in the Mentalist TV show.
I watched the mentalist and made a special point of writing down how many single word sentences were in the story and there were more than 100, that's about 2 a minute given add breaks. Hmm, OK, Uh HUH, Really, Yes, No, Possibly, Yep, Cheers, Boo, Hurry, How? Hey, MM, UM0MMM, Uhm Um, Uh, So, Sure, Absolutely, Ah, and then we repeat them all over and over.

I am beginning to look more at how they break down scenes into dialogue in TV shows.

Now I plan to read, "How to write Killed Fiction" for an hour then use my Read4Me program to read back my current chapter I am working on.
 


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